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听《爸爸的梦想》有感, 为原版远方译写0 l' s1 r2 C) D; E* w
《爸爸的梦想》-祝父亲节快乐!
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-Happy Father's Day
$ ~3 P/ Q, l n; A( H x 作词:原版远方 作曲:谭锦明
+ p3 B9 S# K2 O3 O' X# X配器:于 洋 男声首唱:于 洋 女声首唱:小卵石
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4 h. m+ x6 o) R当人去街宁,打开邮箱,久疏而觉格外亲。一支歌曲,来自远方,不亦乐乎,此君好文,原版笔墨,力透荧屏,未曾晤面,共鸣无限,神交网路,其乐融融。迫不及待,点击便听,链接奉上:9 i$ m+ t; a. a" u) J
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一支歌曲如不能一气连听三遍者,不为上乘。而此曲,乐起悠扬,初起清新童稚,转而深沉励志,继而情深哲理。墨沾父子深情游子志怀,写尽海外学子思母相思。春夏秋冬,山高水长,听来复去,已韵入胸膛。3 W. B- t0 q9 O: ]+ S* \6 H
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当感动涟涟,润浸眼眶,就不得不让心中的连动,留在了纸上。
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于洋男声版:0 H1 }9 x. {; f4 Y2 `5 p+ p
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小卵石女声版:4 [: X- ~% y! y0 ^" M: s
http://www.liuxueliange.com/bbdmx-2010-xls.htm
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6 L) v+ q- @' HAuthor: 远方
8 b8 G: k5 ]) P7 J* f% MComposer: Tan Jinming9 O, E) R: m6 q& c' B
Orchestration: Yu Yang
8 u# G: p* O3 k/ K, p; q, {0 DSinger Male : Yu Yang
" [' r, d- t0 |Singer Female: Xiao Ruan-shi
7 s8 [5 T1 y* T R9 ]1 E 《爸爸的梦想》-祝父亲节快乐!' W, Q2 d7 `8 u& P$ Y) U) ^" O w% X
小时候 爸爸带我登上山岗( ?4 R( q4 A7 {% j% M# j; E$ _
望着远处青山 说起儿时的梦想
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那是传说中的人间天堂: ?( A- S( R* j. n7 I% I2 Y2 c) f* _
The first mounting onto the hill, me a kid, very little,
( J+ l3 V' W$ [4 `hills, hills, and hills still, but dreams of a child never old. " b6 V' [( J! @% z9 R3 T7 I, t
a student, by the Lake of West, lonesome moonlight at waterfront, laid.# h- t( F+ J9 R0 X: P
a legend told, so many years, and love story buried in a tower, Lei/ t3 s( g. M0 S+ X- z! J
0 W& v: s% T) g- w3 y, E9 t小时候 爸爸带我回到家乡 B0 j! L9 s$ k- e# b
重温昔日小屋 说起心中的希望
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上下求索之路并不漫长
/ P+ N# _! B1 O4 x- h( R1 lMany times, we back home, hands of his, and mine hold, Deep hopes,
, s: I: W- v. \% o; a. @; _spoken and heard from behind a window, a room warm, little and old, 4 \6 @5 r3 _2 u h4 p
Good boy, go, across the oecean and see the world, ( G& ~9 W- r i, d' j8 f
Beijing, NewYork, voyage, A map paint, a Globe,
" N* r1 S) N2 j( @9 t8 `, S, ktrips are short, but journey is long, steps to the hopes printed on the road.
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2 S- s, [; u0 h7 B& x十年寒窗 有了梦就有了力量2 `) t0 Y. L' [; Z1 O3 g5 u
坚定着方向带着期望
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这就是传说中的世界之窗
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on my desk into a window, tall and long / @: _, m# r# w* R' ?, [
my dreams milks my will, as rocks in the wall, 5 g6 Z7 H/ R# \3 t
firm footprints, cries in NewYork streets so aloud, echos knocks empty windows
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飞过蓝天,飞过海洋外面的世界靠自己闯
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Eagles loves blue in the sky, as the sails-man loves waves in the sea.' K3 A# N" Q( G5 J6 l0 b6 B
Sunshine days summer, moonlight nights long in a fall, a world too big to see,
\1 f* p6 i C7 [7 N, j/ ~Summers greet falls, as winters kisses the spring's lips,
1 A" |) p# P( X' s CMoon moves slow in dark clouds, falling leaves, black hair in whites.
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山不再高,路不再长
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忘记了悲欢,忘记了离合
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" F9 C5 a, i% |+ G* nRoads in the country, a novel tells hills never grow,0 c* `7 w( V/ l' Z+ h& U: M
footprints on trips, mark all maps, a home of hopes down the hills,
3 k# h# }. m* U. q. o; k* f4 sHappy tears, hugs n a girl, goodbyes n memories make us old,
4 b4 i, C4 K( A! A3 w# _, uDaddy's hope, Dreams of sorrows, A story be told, 5 d N% E0 q9 v3 Q
一语译写
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