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原版远方《留学恋歌》原创系列-译写2 ^) C1 S/ a5 X u( {7 A
周末译趣
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. |. O6 a5 j k; G* i' F【序】-应邀为一国际华人某医学协会写一首会歌。写给为人类生命医学做贡献的华人医生及医学科学家们。7 m% b2 j6 f/ m, @
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-He wrote the original one in Chinese. E version, done without delay after read his text. Above lines made me feel it's a song devoted to some Chinese Doctors and scientists whose work contributed to the life science of mankind, from this side of the ocean. 0 N% I( @! W6 I8 H7 k5 t8 z$ H
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原版远方, -He writes authentically, only when he sees something emotional, and touching his heart. I did once, when the quake hit the Wen-chuan China 2008, really hard to look at the lines as there were tears in the eyes...
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" F5 j- H& |1 C "A bridge built, called miracle" $ v$ K% P2 F" J
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3 `6 W7 x! t0 N% b4 h: H/ V走遍天涯 追寻梦想
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每个细胞都充满希望
4 B, r) {0 O$ o" H让无悔的青春闪烁光芒
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Sun shines from south to north, we dream a dream,
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shines, forever, A pretty girl in spring, morning, brings a miracle,
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走过曲折 志在四方4 X- k; c" _6 i; F: h! _ s
肩负使命 为人类健康
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让宝贵的生命更加坚强
0 g0 z/ C% o: B: E: eOld countries and cities new, left behind, wills like steel,
- k4 @, G% {- @: `( uOur hearts beat young, never old,
% A$ k# n/ A7 y9 ? ?2 qOn our shoulders, the spring morning dew,
# K7 ~: ]2 N2 G( A% QLike waves cares the land, Oh, spring girl' f; e) @4 d) a* D3 N: x2 h
Angle's lips warm, sweet, never cold+ D) D- y; s4 q4 o2 y$ Q$ A
She sings a song, that make you strong, when u weakened, and poor,
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架起连通中西的桥梁. C. i- R( k6 Y
上下求索处处桃李芬芳
9 N* d: T5 |9 `) d拼搏创新造就成功殿堂3 n0 b2 O6 Y% ?" t: q( q
手拉手我们共创辉煌
0 s! a; E. B- U, w0 b T8 ]1 tAcross East and West, A bridge, we built, called miracle, 1 v, ?+ b+ h9 E9 ~% T
We walk in schools, we talk to fruits in the garden full,
4 p/ O; {8 V8 W2 l7 xWe try and discover, the Gold, in a century well, $ Y: \6 t; S2 @
search, from deep heart to an inner soul,4 a9 \* v" ?- |
Hand in hand, time grow old, we go, Oh, ; m# T4 p3 N! l) I- P1 f
we produce miracle, A new birth, of a brilliant tomorrow
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Photo, by 四川 爱思网 石川先生,Authorized by 24en.com, zhou# M. N) d' N# a- `! h# _
, C5 p" f: ^' q$ C" g' z" o【译后的话】赠此次 0 ^8 r) _# M* q: D: y# O7 g$ {/ _
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6 A2 L9 h6 ?" G/ z% ]) w安大略省 大专院校 汉语辩论大赛 的同学们和评委老师誌念!
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& e# [! M4 D+ {( o. H Yesterday, I read one text message from one of the Cyber-freinds who wrote " F* B6 b. T" @6 f, L' g- F
many songs and poems in ChinaGate, 中国文学城, 北美较大华语网,his name is: 原版远方, I did once his song, during the 中国汶川震灾!
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" s0 w* P# d7 k* ^ 今天的论题,使我想起了他!他邀我试译,一首汉语歌词。受你们论辩的激情和活力的激励,我一气呵成,成了一首 【译写】-汉诗英韵. "A bridge, built, called miracle" 赠给我在本次活动中, 遇见的所有同学和评委老师们,
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j7 b# w4 E2 D8 R1 H m' A1 p 一语湖边
' H+ j! ~/ d3 E8 X Johnlakeshore
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