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听《爸爸的梦想》有感， 为原版远方译写
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"Father's Dream"
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作词：原版远方 作曲：谭锦明& Z% ~9 J% L; B) Q( J# h7 }2 {
配器：于 洋 男声首唱：于 洋 女声首唱：小卵石* c3 Z: x2 z" K7 i- j" }
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`2 o2 x0 r5 m7 k5 W3 K远方湖面，白帆络绎，小艇荡漾，傍晚骤雨，巨虹悬空。入夜小镇，一年一次，音乐节日，顿时，异域庞克，Rock飞乐，倒是激情，喧闹异常。几近午夜，竟彩焰升空，似银柳翠空，仲夏艳丽，簇拥万情。' b2 r4 w5 S3 O$ C
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当人去街宁，打开邮箱，久疏而觉格外亲。一支歌曲，来自远方，不亦乐乎，此君好文，原版笔墨，力透荧屏，未曾晤面，共鸣无限，神交网路，其乐融融。迫不及待，点击便听，链接奉上：
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一支歌曲如不能一气连听三遍者，不为上乘。而此曲，乐起悠扬，初起清新童稚，转而深沉励志，继而情深哲理。墨沾父子深情游子志怀，写尽海外学子思母相思。春夏秋冬，山高水长，听来复去，已韵入胸膛。5 J/ M& H$ R0 [: A' \: M
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当感动涟涟，润浸眼眶，就不得不让心中的连动，留在了纸上。
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于洋男声版：
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' l i9 D/ |- a小卵石女声版：! O0 F) O& [2 `; u9 _/ C4 t$ W: ~
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Author: 远方
% y) g* q# i6 r' v }5 M9 q; XComposer: Tan Jinming+ j2 K7 X9 {" y1 _, C# b- S
Orchestration: Yu Yang
1 W% I' g/ Y2 DSinger Male : Yu Yang! ]3 r% K! L4 Y N: k
Singer Female: Xiao Ruan-shi
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小时候 爸爸带我登上山岗
0 o5 I" e4 }4 a望着远处青山 说起儿时的梦想* n* u# i6 f2 [- z3 \: R
为求学 远走他乡 独自来到西湖旁
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The first mounting onto the hill, me a kid, very little, - m: b& y# X. \2 Q
hills, hills, and hills still, but dreams of a child never old. % }3 w- O- _0 F
a student, by the Lake of West, lonesome moonlight at waterfront, laid.
! @, m. k( q1 a. A a4 p6 C$ g' da legend told, so many years, and love story buried in a tower, Lei4 }4 I2 s: M2 h( d! a5 j
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小时候 爸爸带我回到家乡: h: A/ M' m' ?. Y: G$ N
重温昔日小屋 说起心中的希望
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上下求索之路并不漫长8 h+ i+ |1 p% u9 C( n7 W9 f
Many times, we back home, hands of his, and mine hold, Deep hopes, p$ ~4 M6 W- K, D" Y. u3 G
spoken and heard from behind a window, a room warm, little and old, ; @) b8 }$ w+ m, `$ X
Good boy, go, across the oecean and see the world, 5 q! p6 r* L1 O) y5 \$ ]$ H
Beijing, NewYork, voyage, A map paint, a Globe, 5 m4 Q2 Y" N0 G
trips are short, but journey is long, steps to the hopes printed on the road.
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十年寒窗 有了梦就有了力量" Q. O: b1 G, r" |$ Q
坚定着方向带着期望2 a3 B" \4 s' h6 Y9 K {
终于走在纽约的大街上* M1 Q4 h, T6 J$ Q
这就是传说中的世界之窗- e, N) r) v% v8 m
Winter snows cold, Morning sunshine falls 6 ]& X$ X5 z% F! m$ y% r
on my desk into a window, tall and long " X, j% s* U2 @+ ], g4 {8 Y! P' x+ E
my dreams milks my will, as rocks in the wall,
: N2 ~5 o7 I% Q$ i8 O/ `1 ^# Efirm footprints, cries in NewYork streets so aloud, echos knocks empty windows
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记不住阴晴，记不住圆缺却记得爸爸鬓角的白发4 R* ^- n# t1 A: N H- L: S9 Y
Eagles loves blue in the sky, as the sails-man loves waves in the sea.9 Z# U* j3 I" v- D: \
Sunshine days summer, moonlight nights long in a fall, a world too big to see,
$ m) \! U, S6 e- \ y8 FSummers greet falls, as winters kisses the spring's lips,
/ P$ X7 Y" v- B) }Moon moves slow in dark clouds, falling leaves, black hair in whites. ) r, o/ Y6 r" V
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山不再高，路不再长/ Z1 a2 f% {4 {, A# X8 O a
一串串脚印伸向远方
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Roads in the country, a novel tells hills never grow,
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Happy tears, hugs n a girl, goodbyes n memories make us old,
4 w$ y* r# m5 O! }Daddy's hope, Dreams of sorrows, A story be told, 1 p0 K) t' T9 M- n% @
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发表于 2010-6-20 12:03
jave, Andy：诺君能喜欢，吾心足矣！
发表于 2010-6-20 17:55
我有一样的感触
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