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7 ?; N: r T; `2 V# L) ~6 G; ~( M听《爸爸的梦想》有感, 为原版远方译写0 X1 G# I) V; M! ?
《爸爸的梦想》-祝父亲节快乐! 6 X& j$ Y2 [3 o2 h( H
"Father's Dream"
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作词:原版远方 作曲:谭锦明
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9 C- b" _* `! {+ Z+ y1 F s2 E' O8 P译写手记:# _1 {( |1 x% u
远方湖面,白帆络绎,小艇荡漾,傍晚骤雨,巨虹悬空。入夜小镇,一年一次,音乐节日,顿时,异域庞克,Rock飞乐,倒是激情,喧闹异常。几近午夜,竟彩焰升空,似银柳翠空,仲夏艳丽,簇拥万情。1 L0 {& \- I1 g1 Q( g
0 q. w" x: P" c! T当人去街宁,打开邮箱,久疏而觉格外亲。一支歌曲,来自远方,不亦乐乎,此君好文,原版笔墨,力透荧屏,未曾晤面,共鸣无限,神交网路,其乐融融。迫不及待,点击便听,链接奉上:
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2 e6 X4 D: f; U- K一支歌曲如不能一气连听三遍者,不为上乘。而此曲,乐起悠扬,初起清新童稚,转而深沉励志,继而情深哲理。墨沾父子深情游子志怀,写尽海外学子思母相思。春夏秋冬,山高水长,听来复去,已韵入胸膛。$ t$ m' W' V0 Q& n4 S- i" H, |5 P
& S+ [' x/ y$ o( b! E当感动涟涟,润浸眼眶,就不得不让心中的连动,留在了纸上。
" G6 g9 Q& ^' H& X: v5 {* ^2 k& @是否,就它,叠一纸鹤,放飞而去,捎给远方。
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于洋男声版:" A+ y" K1 t+ t6 a
http://www.liuxueliange.com/bbdmx-2010-yuyang.htm, I d! Z* L5 O: M% ~
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小卵石女声版:
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Composer: Tan Jinming% |" G. H- r7 U5 x
Orchestration: Yu Yang
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Singer Female: Xiao Ruan-shi
& o6 M% y$ Y8 F! D* s 《爸爸的梦想》-祝父亲节快乐!
9 w2 W/ a- S& e0 B) s$ |9 N 小时候 爸爸带我登上山岗3 U% I- Q' C) t0 v' Q
望着远处青山 说起儿时的梦想: ]- P/ V" ]0 [
为求学 远走他乡 独自来到西湖旁
2 z/ Z. O1 t9 C: d那是传说中的人间天堂+ @& E0 q* [3 z% O9 L' |2 ~: B
The first mounting onto the hill, me a kid, very little,
6 Q4 Y' g) {: J& Qhills, hills, and hills still, but dreams of a child never old. 6 b+ Q8 F/ V, p8 z$ b! z
a student, by the Lake of West, lonesome moonlight at waterfront, laid.
# M4 q, U# J8 H, W" l$ x# oa legend told, so many years, and love story buried in a tower, Lei* n/ U ], D# i
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小时候 爸爸带我回到家乡
1 z5 o% X8 |% B1 M; T重温昔日小屋 说起心中的希望& J0 G& \1 l, I" w% u
好男儿 志在四方 北京纽约去远航
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Many times, we back home, hands of his, and mine hold, Deep hopes, 4 u2 Z. x0 Q5 D/ i& J
spoken and heard from behind a window, a room warm, little and old, 9 w* _ i. U' y+ n& W: w
Good boy, go, across the oecean and see the world, & x: F( R( @: G- R+ o. {* j
Beijing, NewYork, voyage, A map paint, a Globe, - Q% G: m) M2 j2 r
trips are short, but journey is long, steps to the hopes printed on the road. : |! N8 [+ e- s+ N9 ?& V
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坚定着方向带着期望+ C: c( H, S1 n5 \. j
终于走在纽约的大街上
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Winter snows cold, Morning sunshine falls
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my dreams milks my will, as rocks in the wall, * |( S- a( ^+ M+ m! ]8 \
firm footprints, cries in NewYork streets so aloud, echos knocks empty windows
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! }3 e+ m1 Y" ]1 C飞过蓝天,飞过海洋外面的世界靠自己闯+ K4 d/ |& [: Z9 [
记不住阴晴,记不住圆缺却记得爸爸鬓角的白发
/ l5 O; F" K0 E( y/ C" dEagles loves blue in the sky, as the sails-man loves waves in the sea.- a, T4 Q: V% _/ W" ?+ \& ?( R' {
Sunshine days summer, moonlight nights long in a fall, a world too big to see, / m, z8 ]9 T/ U/ n$ Z
Summers greet falls, as winters kisses the spring's lips,
$ P1 O5 {6 M# F2 q% v- ?Moon moves slow in dark clouds, falling leaves, black hair in whites. # p( l8 t; G: b/ a
2 l+ g1 }3 I8 { }* n r8 i山不再高,路不再长1 R' U5 A. T7 T/ r5 G: Y
一串串脚印伸向远方
# S) s. e: t- u# y忘记了悲欢,忘记了离合
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Roads in the country, a novel tells hills never grow,
, Z, c) W# T# D) rfootprints on trips, mark all maps, a home of hopes down the hills, 0 r- }' a1 @! h$ g" M
Happy tears, hugs n a girl, goodbyes n memories make us old, 9 E+ n: w7 s3 ]2 J: U4 B
Daddy's hope, Dreams of sorrows, A story be told, ' m c- \+ r/ `; i
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