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听《爸爸的梦想》有感, 为原版远方译写
( F0 v% G/ b, R《爸爸的梦想》-祝父亲节快乐!
2 W+ }. r# i# Z( |4 E "Father's Dream"
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" [4 T4 x2 x. |, \) C5 x, y8 ~, ^ 作词:原版远方 作曲:谭锦明 r! A) }. m1 D/ h' T% d8 j
配器:于 洋 男声首唱:于 洋 女声首唱:小卵石
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译写手记:3 j ~ w7 F+ x2 u* g
远方湖面,白帆络绎,小艇荡漾,傍晚骤雨,巨虹悬空。入夜小镇,一年一次,音乐节日,顿时,异域庞克,Rock飞乐,倒是激情,喧闹异常。几近午夜,竟彩焰升空,似银柳翠空,仲夏艳丽,簇拥万情。6 ]& W F" C# U1 n F. z
; G! @4 F7 ^) A当人去街宁,打开邮箱,久疏而觉格外亲。一支歌曲,来自远方,不亦乐乎,此君好文,原版笔墨,力透荧屏,未曾晤面,共鸣无限,神交网路,其乐融融。迫不及待,点击便听,链接奉上:
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一支歌曲如不能一气连听三遍者,不为上乘。而此曲,乐起悠扬,初起清新童稚,转而深沉励志,继而情深哲理。墨沾父子深情游子志怀,写尽海外学子思母相思。春夏秋冬,山高水长,听来复去,已韵入胸膛。4 x: N( ~4 Q+ q- T
/ G! b: D$ G7 S当感动涟涟,润浸眼眶,就不得不让心中的连动,留在了纸上。
% x" x% A% I( B1 _+ ?是否,就它,叠一纸鹤,放飞而去,捎给远方。' G$ y) O/ R; ^+ R" T
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于洋男声版:- c- U& w0 L3 u D) v2 c
http://www.liuxueliange.com/bbdmx-2010-yuyang.htm
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小卵石女声版:6 o `* c$ ]. ^( b$ K9 ]/ o
http://www.liuxueliange.com/bbdmx-2010-xls.htm
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Author: 远方7 x+ O# y7 m! z% {
Composer: Tan Jinming& L- P6 {' G- e: s
Orchestration: Yu Yang) r8 I5 A0 G7 q
Singer Male : Yu Yang+ m0 W# K6 o% e' P( u+ B3 y W
Singer Female: Xiao Ruan-shi
1 r) B c/ H# F5 \1 D 《爸爸的梦想》-祝父亲节快乐!
* ~) |' Y( g$ t5 b 小时候 爸爸带我登上山岗! L/ B% h( E. I. n( {
望着远处青山 说起儿时的梦想3 a# }& j! v1 b* v: D- |) w
为求学 远走他乡 独自来到西湖旁 ] L) G8 r% d* C3 Y' n5 |
那是传说中的人间天堂
/ M5 X2 E+ S" \The first mounting onto the hill, me a kid, very little,
( e! T7 x# f [6 g! jhills, hills, and hills still, but dreams of a child never old.
. ^; c2 I9 t5 y! [9 z" Ia student, by the Lake of West, lonesome moonlight at waterfront, laid.
* K/ S8 C5 M- {a legend told, so many years, and love story buried in a tower, Lei
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+ c6 d. }8 T5 G" o+ _ c2 s小时候 爸爸带我回到家乡
! }1 Q2 m2 f$ d6 H# n% ]* Y. n# d重温昔日小屋 说起心中的希望# C1 l6 {6 r' [ S3 ^
好男儿 志在四方 北京纽约去远航+ L" o8 x! k) \1 L3 ]
上下求索之路并不漫长& Z% i# x( x3 V( ?4 A! z4 h6 ^
Many times, we back home, hands of his, and mine hold, Deep hopes, % b3 F7 G( T& Z! _" e0 g# r& {
spoken and heard from behind a window, a room warm, little and old,
# O( Q; `5 T8 B. xGood boy, go, across the oecean and see the world,
) o; | Z% ^. k2 s) _$ MBeijing, NewYork, voyage, A map paint, a Globe, 4 B' r$ q0 V3 W c' Y: e; M
trips are short, but journey is long, steps to the hopes printed on the road.
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# \+ I* @ f5 r0 [ C十年寒窗 有了梦就有了力量
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终于走在纽约的大街上
7 k) ^& d0 N7 N3 A* c& \. F' Y; B P这就是传说中的世界之窗
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on my desk into a window, tall and long
' Q/ J9 z% j6 n- O! pmy dreams milks my will, as rocks in the wall, 7 U M6 s" C3 s1 J" r: ]6 e( @0 x- e
firm footprints, cries in NewYork streets so aloud, echos knocks empty windows
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飞过蓝天,飞过海洋外面的世界靠自己闯
5 A6 Y; P2 P4 T' L* t记不住阴晴,记不住圆缺却记得爸爸鬓角的白发" U* h& O$ v: X1 |
Eagles loves blue in the sky, as the sails-man loves waves in the sea.
( Q7 P$ J0 Y# W% J5 D& SSunshine days summer, moonlight nights long in a fall, a world too big to see, / ?8 b+ x* c8 h2 J
Summers greet falls, as winters kisses the spring's lips,
$ P$ q6 \5 w& [+ LMoon moves slow in dark clouds, falling leaves, black hair in whites.
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3 ^% R1 j$ y6 g5 z6 W4 l山不再高,路不再长0 X( r; A7 E# V$ N; x
一串串脚印伸向远方. O+ W4 C# K( E _: Y! o/ y( e
忘记了悲欢,忘记了离合) _/ I, f* c R5 d" P
却忘不了爸爸儿时的梦想7 S) |, i& v2 s9 S
Roads in the country, a novel tells hills never grow,/ o; Z- I8 v; i( F+ M# \
footprints on trips, mark all maps, a home of hopes down the hills, , j4 w3 ~9 B( _# v) S
Happy tears, hugs n a girl, goodbyes n memories make us old, 9 V: l3 u' P( L4 d
Daddy's hope, Dreams of sorrows, A story be told, x& r; I. q4 A" Y; e, t* C2 C' H
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